More creepiness – I hope!

Following on from Caroline’s spine chiller, here’s my short attempt at creepiness.  Called ‘Going down’.

“Going down?” a voice hissed.

Jason nodded, weary.

“Ruined anyone today?”

Then Jason recognised the voice – Mark, an ex-client, a victim of Jason’s fraud.  Wasn’t he…?

Only Jason’s reflection appeared in the mirror.  The ‘basement’ button shone red in the dark.

The lift plummeted.

“Going down,” Mark’s voice confirmed.

 

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